老師人真好,給我很好的評價,真感人,
有振奮人心的感覺,我要把評語表框。
雖然語言使用能力還是欠佳。
請容我show off一下,真開心,小小聲的尖叫。
Su,
This was a very good research brief. You methodically examined the US’s strategic calculations and rationale for its involvement in the Gulf region in general and in the Iran-Iraq War and in Desert Storm in particular.
You really provided an insightful analysis, which was well-structured and to a certain extent decently written. Please pay more attention to your sentence structure and syntax in future essays, as you sometimes wrote in a less clear manner.
You used a good array of bibliographical citations, which you quoted judiciously throughout your brief. You did, though, go over the word limit, which you could have avoided by occasionally expressing yourself in a more succinct manner. See further comments below.
In any case, this was a very good brief, which I enjoyed reading.
(所以我的工作就是取悅老師嗎 囧)
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